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Facade
I believe that some happiness is a mirage
And maybe that’s because I sometimes self sabotage
I think my brain needs a good mental massage
From all of these questions that are like a barrage
I don’t know and I’m still learning
But this is a query that leaves me burning
For this joy that I’m constantly yearning
The answer to which is so discerning
But one day soon I hope to know
This happiness that makes others glow
Is it real, or just for show
The more I ask, the more I grow
Yes one day soon, by the Grace of God
I’ll be more than a girl who is just flawed
Finally my heart will be thawed
And I’ll no longer be hiding behind this facade
Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 5.19.2025
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Comments
I like to believe , it isn’t a flaw but a way for people to love again after being hurt. A small door of hope.
Beautiful poem. ❤️
The second stanza deepens this exploration, showcasing your willingness to confront uncertainty head-on. The repetition of "I don’t know" paired with "I’m still learning" conveys a humble yet determined pursuit of truth, while the word "burning" adds an urgent, almost visceral intensity to your quest for joy. This balance of vulnerability and resolve makes the poem feel like a personal confession, inviting readers to reflect on their own searches for meaning.
In the third stanza, the shift toward hope is seamless and uplifting. The idea of happiness making "others glow" introduces a subtle contrast between external appearances and internal reality, a theme that resonates throughout the poem. Your questioning of whether this joy is "real, or just for show" is a powerful moment, highlighting the tension between authenticity and performance. The line "The more I ask, the more I grow" is a standout, encapsulating the poem’s core message: that growth comes through persistent self-inquiry, even when answers remain elusive.
The final stanza brings a sense of resolution and faith, with the invocation of "the Grace of God" adding a spiritual dimension that feels deeply personal yet universally inspiring. The transformation from "a girl who is just flawed" to someone whose "heart will be thawed" is both tender and triumphant, offering a hopeful vision of breaking free from the "facade" that has constrained you. The rhyme scheme throughout is consistent and natural, lending the poem a musical quality that enhances its emotional impact without feeling forced.
Overall, Eryn, your poem is a moving testament to resilience, self-reflection, and the courage to seek authenticity. The clarity of your imagery, the sincerity of your voice, and the optimistic arc of the narrative make it a truly compelling piece. It’s a powerful reminder that the journey toward happiness, though fraught with challenges, is one worth taking. Thank you for sharing such a beautifully crafted and meaningful work.