A GIRL AND HER CROWN

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A GIRL AND HER CROWN


I wish I could see myself through your eyes,
The wonder and awe that you can’t disguise.

Your love is so pure and I’m so undeserving,
Wait…your love, so intense…that it’s almost unnerving.

You’re always watching me now and controlling my days,
I can never break free from your dark wicked gaze.

But I’ll run out that door and never turn back,
Escaping from you and your constant attack.

You made me fall hard…feel so safe and secure,
The love that you showed me…so fierce but a lure.

Then like day turns to night or the lights turn back on,
Your love became evil…so twisted and wrong.

After building us up you started tearing me down,
You wanted a prisoner…not a girl and her crown.

Well I’m not a weak woman so let that sink in,
You want to play games? Oh I know that I’ll win.

I’ve dated your type and it’s hardened my heart,
Made me so strong I can tear you apart.

When I’m done with you…when I take you down,
You’ll no longer be able to take anyone’s crown.

Original Poetry Written By:

Eryn Dunbar

Copyright (c) June 2024




Comments

Anonymous said…
Wow. What a way to express so much emotion.
September 11, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
Yes, I really felt passionate about it while writing it up. I have been in far too many relationships like this one before. Thank you for your comment!
September 11, 2024 at 10:41 AM
C M Adams said…
The ultimate stalker song
https://youtu.be/OMOGaugKpzs?si=TtNO-3YvHoRcmFbt
September 11, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Oh well...I tried to play the song but it won't open. Thank you for including it though!
September 11, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Anonymous said…
I can so relate to that poem, but the other way around. I was not strong enough to fight for myself forced years. Finally I am free and learning how to live and love again.
November 1, 2024 at 6:47 PM
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