THIS IS WHAT MY HEAVEN LOOKS LIKE

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This is what my heaven looks like
People happy and free 

Living their best afterlife
It looks so good to me

We might forever leave our bodies
But I know our souls live on

Maybe we will miss our loved ones
But are they ever truly gone

This is what my heaven looks like
A bunch of familiar faces

Made up of friends and family
From a bunch of different places

Angels flying from cloud to cloud
And full of peoples laughter

Isn't it so nice to think
That this is the next chapter

So if this is my version of heaven
Do you have one of your own

Filled with people that love you
And that you have always known

So I really do think
This is what it will mean for me

When I pass on from this life
And experience eternity

This is what my heaven looks like
It's full of love and light

It's not like life on earth
That is much more black and white

Where people are able
To argue, fight and fuss

Heaven is so elevated
And made for each of us

So one day I'll invite you
To come see what all mine has instore 

I'll be waiting and holding out my hand to you
As you come walking through my door

Poetry Written By:

Eryn Dunbar


Comments

Ryan said…
Absolutely love this! Well done E!
November 5, 2024 at 7:27 PM
Justice13james said…
I love this subject matter and your version your vision how it's so inviting
comfy and happy . The innocence of your HEAVEN one more reason to love your mind and you
November 5, 2024 at 7:46 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you so much, RyRy! I really appreciate you! ❤️
November 6, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
Aww...thank you so much, JJ! I really believe heaven is what each of us want it to be. Tailor made for each of us!!
November 6, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Anonymous said…
I do like this poem very much. It became so poignant when I lost my son years ago. It is something I look forward to seeing him again. 💙
November 6, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
I hope you know he is always with you. I am truly so very sorry for your loss and your pain. ♥️♥️♥️
November 7, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Anonymous said…
As crazy as this sounds in a moment of sheer desperation and need I was given the strength of an angels wing .has any body else experienced this ??⁷
November 9, 2024 at 5:48 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Although I haven't had this exact experience, I have had otherworldly things happen to me. You are always loved and accepted here!
November 10, 2024 at 11:48 AM
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