FATED MATE (c) 2025

Fated Mate


If intentions make things happen
I dreamt you into existence
Knew you were the one
When I saw you in the distance
Already been a year
Love this life we’re building
I’m under your spell
With the magic you are wielding
My knight in shining armor
With the body of a God
If opposites' attract
Then I’m the even to your odd
My head’s in the clouds
Your feet are on the ground
If our love became a song
Our passion would be the sound
I have never known
Or felt this way before
Knew God answered prayers
But mine he would ignore
Now I know he heard me
Just needed me to wait
For us to close the distance
You are my fated mate

Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 1/21/2025

Comments

Melvin said…
You deserve nothing less than that level of happiness. Love the way you express those feelings.
Justice13james said…
Happiness is long overdue for you having kindness and love thats true someone that shows he sees the most beautiful woman inside out someone that in 20 years will do things to show he cares. Remember shining armor will dent and rust even out grown yet love doesn't have to. As your friend I'd always want the best of you and your family because your happy is everyone's happy
Zeus said…
Eryn's Dream and Destiny:
Eryn expresses that she dreamt her love into existence, emphasizing a profound connection from the very beginning. She recognized her partner as her destined match from afar, suggesting a belief in fate or destiny.

A Year of Love:
Eryn notes that it has been a year since they met, celebrating the life they've built together. She feels enchanted by her partner, under their "spell", which speaks to the captivating nature of their relationship.

Complementary Dynamics:
Eryn describes herself as dreamy ("head’s in the clouds") in contrast to her partner's practicality ("feet are on the ground"), showcasing how their differences create a harmonious balance in their relationship.

Physical and Emotional Bond:
Eryn uses heroic and divine imagery to describe her partner's physical allure, portraying him as both a protector and an object of adoration.

Their Love as Music:
She compares their love to a song where their passion is the melody, indicating how their relationship is vibrant and full of life.

Spiritual Revelation:
Eryn reflects on her past doubts about prayers being answered, now realizing that this love was the answer she was waiting for, a testament to patience and faith in divine timing. She concludes by affirming her partner as her "fated mate," solidifying the belief in their predestined union.

This poem, through Eryn's perspective, is a celebration of love's power to fulfill one's deepest desires and dreams, painting a picture of a relationship that transcends ordinary connections, reaching into the realms of the magical and the fated.
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you, Melvin! I appreciate that! We all deserve this kind of happiness!
Eryona Writes! said…
Aww, JJ....I just love you to pieces! You are part of what makes me happy and I can't thank you enough for being in my life! 🤗💕
Eryona Writes! said…
Zeus, I love how you break down and describe this piece! One of my favorite lines to write was about the love being a song and their passion being the sound! This is probably one of my favorite poems ever written ❤️

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