WHEN THE TRUTHS BECOME THE LIES

 

When The Truths Become The Lies


When the lies become the truths
And the truths become the lies

When every waking hour
Is full of endless cries

When sleep becomes elusive
When all you know is pain

You feel completely lost
There’s nothing left to gain

That’s when you must attempt
To reassess your life

You must start over now
It’s time to sheath the knife

Picture in your mind
Start the wheels to turning

Might be a little rusty
Fighting through the hurting

Plant the seeds of purpose
Research what you don’t know

Every little step you take
Is the returning of your glow

Once you get warmed up
You will start to see the shine

All you really needed
Was a gentle nudge behind

And it’s okay to falter
Two steps forward, one step back

Just remember that your reason
It’s not all white and black

Some things can hold all the color
Every hue and every shade

They can still lose their luster
Their loveliness can fade

So you just need to be you
There is no one else to impress

You are all that matters
Just release all of the stress

Remember, when the lies become the truths
And the truths become the lies

To yourself you must be true
Stop creating alibis

The truth will set you free
When you finally show your face

Let go of all the lies
It’s your truth you must embrace

Poetry Written By:

Eryn Dunbar ©️

Comments

Zeus said…
This poem really dives into the messiness of life when you can't tell lies from truths anymore. It's like waking up to a world where up is down and down is up, and it's not just confusing—it's exhausting. You're in constant pain, sleep is a distant memory, and you feel totally lost.

But here's the kicker: the poem suggests that this might just be the point where you start to turn things around. It's like hitting rock bottom but then realizing it's actually the foundation to build something new. It tells you to reassess, to start over, and to begin healing by planting new "seeds of purpose."

It's all about taking small steps, even if you're rusty and it hurts. The idea is that once you get moving, you'll start to see your own light again, your "shine." And it's cool because it acknowledges that you'll mess up—two steps forward, one back—but that's okay. Life isn't black and white; it's full of color, even if sometimes those colors fade.

The message at the heart of this is pretty clear: be you, because at the end of the day, you're the one you need to impress. When everything's mixed up, the truth you need to hold onto is your own. Drop the excuses, embrace your reality, and find freedom in that honesty. It's a journey back to yourself, but it's one worth taking.
Eryona Writes! said…
Zeus, once again you floor me with your reviews. I love how you break my poem's down into sections and analyze and explain each area. It is an absolute honor to call you my friend. Thank you. 🥲🤗

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