JADED

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Jaded

The older I get 
The more jaded I feel 
I fantasized about love 
But now know it’s not real 

At least not for me 
At least not yet 
So much heartache 
For me to forget 

I want passion 
Wrapped in someone’s arms 
Sweet words flowing 
Always spouting charms 

Surrounded by love 
I’d be so grateful 
But so far it’s only been 
Vicious and hateful 

I want to be needed 
To know that I mattered 
Pick up my heart's pieces 
From where it’s been shattered 

I don’t want to be jaded 
Treat me like a jewel 
Show me kindness and warmth
Not something wicked and cruel 

Shower me with your love 
Wash away all my pain 
I want to be your Queen 
I’m ready to reign 

I know I sound desperate 
But I’m desperate to feel 
Please show me this love 
The kind… that is real 

Original Poetry Written By 
Eryn Dunbar 
Copyright (c) 1.28.2025


Comments

Justice13james said…
The hole in my heart just got bigger and it's ok remembering the good years
Being an ornament instead the crown jewel the reason someone wakes a bit early to watch you sleep, the reason flowers smell sweeter. It's not going to happen for me again doing those things and more Bijo means beautiful woman in Japanese , Bijou is jewel in French. You're more than worthy of all the blessings and beautiful gifts passion, love, respect and yet more than you thought there was to live. It's easier to keep all that alive and meaningful I gave up
February 4, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Zeus said…
Your poem captures a profound sense of longing and disillusionment with love, contrasted with a deep desire for genuine affection and warmth. It speaks to the universal human experience of seeking connection while grappling with past hurts.

The imagery of wanting to be treated like a jewel and showered with love conveys a yearning for not just love, but for respect and tenderness. The contrast between the harshness you've experienced and the gentle love you seek is powerfully drawn.

This poem is a plea for healing and affirmation, highlighting the resilience of the human spirit to hope, even after repeated disappointments. It resonates with anyone who has felt jaded by love yet still holds a candle for the possibility of something true and beautiful.

Thank you for sharing such an honest and moving piece. It's a reminder of the complexities of love and the courage it takes to keep one's heart open despite the risks.
February 4, 2025 at 2:40 PM
Melvin said…
You gave a difficult and sometimes sad topic beauty. Love can heal many wounds. Sometimes our interpretation of the love we desire and dream of makes us feel it is unattainable. Love at any level is better than none at all. It's out there and it will find you.
February 4, 2025 at 4:12 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
JJ, Maybe we should make a pact that neither of us gives up. How does that sound? ❤️
February 7, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you for always understanding what I'm saying, Zeus. (All of you ❤️). I feel like I'm starting to become more raw and even more real with my writing. Or maybe it's just because some very kind gentlemen let me know that I've been seen and been heard. And that makes it feel like that for me then. Thank you once again, my friend!
February 7, 2025 at 10:12 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
I Know, sometimes it helps heal parts of you that you didn't even know needed healing, Melvin. So why am I so dang scared? Anyway, I'm sure I will get there eventually. I will say I disagree with the "any level of love is better than none" I will never settle because then I would never be happy and I would make that person miserable too. I hate hurting other people. That's why I won't settle for less than true, healthy, hit it out of the ballpark kind of love. Love you, my friend.💕
February 7, 2025 at 10:20 AM
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