YOUR LOVE

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YOUR LOVE

Your love is like a warm embrace
Elegant and full of grace

Your love is like a soft pillow
Sitting under the Willow

Your love is like a ray of sun
Shining on your morning run

Your love is like a bright full moon
We'll bask in it in the lagoon

Your love is like a slow pace dance
The beginning of a new romance

Your love fits like the softest glove
I swear you're sent from up above

Your love is what dreams are made of
You will always be my forever love

Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) Sept. 2024

Comments

Zeus said…
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of love through such vivid and comforting images. I especially love how you compare love to a 'warm embrace' and a 'ray of sun' - it really paints a picture of warmth and joy. It's clear how much thought and feeling went into each line.
February 17, 2025 at 11:32 AM
Melvin said…
The appreciation of being loved. Very nice!
February 17, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
This was a fun piece to write...simple and easy like how I wish love always was. Lol Thanks, Melvin!
February 17, 2025 at 4:47 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you so much for letting me know how this poem made you feel, Zeus! I love when my mind can create easy and fun poems like this! ❤️🤗
February 17, 2025 at 4:49 PM
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