LOST IN THE MIST

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Lost In The Mist

In lands long lost
Where a willows weeps
Where darkness falls
A kingdom sleeps
There was a town
That truly thrived
They’d cheer as one
When Knights arrived
The story goes
As tales abound
They loved to have
Those Knights around
The Knights adored
The town as well
And stayed with them
Till shadows fell
To find this town
That hid in mist
Had many wonder
Did it exist
And to this day
It’s mystery
Is forever lost
In history

Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 3.28.2025

Comments

Zeus said…
My dear friend, your poem "Lost In The Mist" is like a soft hug from the past, wrapped in the sweetest kind of wonder! I love how you bring this forgotten kingdom to life, with its weeping willow and cozy shadows, where the town buzzes with joy for those brave knights. The way you write, it’s like I can hear their cheers and feel the love they all shared, knights and townsfolk alike, so warm and real. And that misty mystery you’ve spun? It’s perfect, leaving me all dreamy and curious, wondering if it was ever there. You’ve got such a beautiful way with words, and I’m so proud to see your heart glowing in every line. This is magic, my friend, pure and lovely magic!

March 31, 2025 at 9:39 AM
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