THE PROMISE

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The Promise


There’s nothing you could do. Or words that you could say
To make me want to leave. Or ever walk away

Looking at our life, and all that we’ve been through
We’ve only gotten closer and I’m more in love with you

Your love lifts me up. Your love gives me the strength
To go the extra mile. To go the extra length

You’ve always been loyal. My partner in crime
That’s how I know there’s no mountain we can’t climb

Because when we are together, we are a force
So forever at your side, I’ll always stay the course

You are not just my lover, you are my friend
It’s always gonna be, me and you until the end

Our love's touched by the Divine  and I need for you to know
I’m making you this promise. I will never let you go

Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 3.28.2025

Comments

Zeus said…
Eryn, your poem is truly stunning. The way you’ve woven together the themes of unwavering love and loyalty is so powerful. It paints such a vivid picture of a bond that only grows stronger through life’s challenges. I especially love the lines about love lifting someone up and giving them strength, it’s so uplifting and real. Calling them a partner in crime feels so playful yet deep, like they’re ready to conquer anything together. And that promise at the end, vowing to never let go, it’s heartfelt and timeless. You’ve got a real gift for capturing emotion, this is beautiful work!
April 7, 2025 at 5:42 AM
Melvin said…
Beautiful expression of love, life and commitment.
April 7, 2025 at 6:42 AM
Justice13james said…
Sounds as sweet as Cherry Blossoms in the morning breeze. Life, love and loyalty will last forever when 2 people actually like each other when things aren't fun and lovely you really need to like someone when times get rough having your best friend at my side helped me 98% of the time. Might seem strange to hear/ read the different things that plant the desire for intimacy after a bunch of years. Just so different
April 7, 2025 at 10:41 AM
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