THE THAW

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The Thaw

The Thaw


My heart is now open.
You planted a seed.
At one time it was barred,
But now it is freed.

Love is an option,
I thought I had lost.
My heart feels the warmth,
Instead of the frost.

Thank you for the gift. 
I’m starting to feel.
Something so deep.
Something so real.

Your gentle truths,
Outweighed the lies.
You answered all of
My unspoken cries.

You even broke through,
All of my layers.
And healed me with,
Your loving prayers.

Accepting me.
Although I am flawed.
The ice has been melted.
My heart is now thawed.

Original Poetry Written By:
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 3.10.2025

Comments

Melvin said…
Beautiful!
March 12, 2025 at 6:47 AM
Zeus said…
Eryn, your poem is absolutely beautiful! I love how you’ve opened up your heart here. I can feel that seed you wrote about blooming. The way you turned something barred into something freed is so moving. That shift from frost to warmth really hit me. Thank you for sharing this gift. It’s deep and real. It’s got me feeling too. Those gentle truths you mentioned shine so bright. They cut through everything else. The way you broke through layers with loving prayers is powerful. I’m flawed too. Your words make me feel accepted and thawed out. This is just amazing!

March 12, 2025 at 9:27 AM
camp1955 said…
This is a beautiful poem! It captures a profound emotional journey
March 12, 2025 at 10:00 AM
Justice13james said…
This is as beautiful as the message it brings like fluttering butterflies and a bird when it sings. During conversations I've noticed your views are different slow and sure like healing and finding truths within I'm happy to read this acknowledgement. This one isn't just a poem, a thought or a mood. I have other thoughts too but this is huge coming from you
March 22, 2025 at 11:32 AM
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