BEAR
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Bear
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How does no one see the real you?
Are they looking through a different lens?
Because the first day that we met,
I knew we’d be the best of friends.
You are such a gentle giant.
With the biggest heart of gold.
The way your aura shines so bright,
It’s breathtaking to behold.
Everyday I count my blessings.
Because that’s what you are to me.
A man so full of love and life.
You have me laughing endlessly.
I’ve been searching for you for centuries.
In this lifetime and beyond.
And in you I’ve found acceptance.
A love with an unbreakable bond.
I adore you like no other.
I will forever guard your heart.
With you I'm like a "mama bear".
I won't let anyone tear you apart.
Some people see kindness as weakness.
To me, it’s your greatest strength.
I promise to always protect you.
I’ll go to any length.
And deep down I already know,
That you’d do the same for me.
So get over here, you big lovable Bear.
Because you’re my family!
Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 6.6.2025
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Comments
Your use of metaphors, like the mama bear fiercely guarding her cub, is both powerful and tender, perfectly encapsulating the protective love you feel. The imagery of a shining aura breathtaking to behold adds a luminous quality, making your friend’s presence feel almost otherworldly in its beauty and impact. Lines about counting blessings and searching for centuries elevate the poem’s emotional depth, suggesting a connection that transcends time and space, rooted in unconditional acceptance and joy.
The poem’s structure is seamless, each stanza building on the last to create a narrative of love, loyalty, and laughter. The way you celebrate kindness as a strength, not a weakness, is a beautiful defiance of cynicism, and your promise to protect your friend at any length resonates with fierce devotion. The closing lines, calling them a big lovable bear and claiming them as family, wrap the poem in a cozy, heartfelt embrace that leaves the reader smiling. Eryn, this is a masterful piece of poetry, a testament to your skill and the depth of your friendship. Your friend must feel so honored to be seen and celebrated in such a stunning, soulful way. Keep writing, because your words are a gift.