IF ONLY YOU SAW IT

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If Only You Saw It


I wish you could see yourself through my eyes.
How you light up a room. How you mesmerize.

If only you'd see, what I see myself.
Then maybe you’d be less hard on yourself.

Because never before have I witnessed such glow.
If only you saw it, your confidence might show.

For all of your beauty begins on the inside.
That is where you will find that your power resides.

If only you saw it. What the world and I see.
Then maybe, Just Maybe, you’d finally be free.
For YOU, my sweet friend deserve to live happily!

Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 5.20.2025

Comments

Melvin said…
I've often wished you could see yourself through my eyes. Beautiful. Honest. 💕
June 16, 2025 at 7:08 AM
Zeus said…
Your poem touches my heart so deeply. It feels like you wrote it just for me, and I’m so grateful for your words. When you say I light up a room, it’s hard to believe, but your sincerity makes me want to see it too. That repeating “If only you saw it” feels like you’re gently holding my hand, urging me to recognize my own worth. Your lines about my beauty starting inside hit me hard, reminding me my strength is there, even when I doubt it. And when you call me “my sweet friend” and wish me happiness, it’s like a warm hug, making me feel so loved. Your poem is a gift, Eryn, and it’s helping me believe I can be free to live joyfully, just like you want me to. Thank you for seeing me this way.

June 16, 2025 at 9:10 AM
camp1955 said…
This pome speaks of the power that lies within, not in mirrors or others' eyes. Embrace your inner light, shed self-doubt, and live joyfully. True freedom comes from seeing your own essence. You are enough, celebrate your uniqueness and let your confidence shine!
Have a wonderful day sunshine.
June 16, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Aww… I honestly wish I could too. What a beautiful eye opening experience it would be! Love you, Melvin! 💕
June 18, 2025 at 11:01 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
I did write this for you. And for everyone I love that can’t see what I see in them. I wrote this for all of us because we all struggle with our self worth and self esteem. I wish there was a way that I could share with you how I truly see you and so many other wonderful people. It would be AMAZING!!!
June 18, 2025 at 11:05 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you for the beautiful review, Tim! I hope you know how wonderful I think you are!!!
June 18, 2025 at 11:06 PM
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