PURE AND TENDER

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Pure And Tender


I’m falling to pieces
Like a puzzle unfinished
I move like a zombie
With my vision diminished

Which way do I turn
My path is unclear
Being lost and alone
Is my greatest fear

If I reach out my hand
Will you pull me close
I need your courage
Like I need a dose

Will you be my companion
Will you walk with me
Will you show me the way
Or will you only flee

I desperately need you
My partner in crime
I feel like I’m starting
To run out of time

My heart’s feeling frozen
My emotions are numb
So my arms are wide open
You need only come

Please come to me
I need your strength
I’m willing and able
To go any length

Your love gives me power
You’re one of a kind
There is no one better
That I’ll ever find

So let’s walk this path
Us two together
And share in a love
That will last forever

I reach out my hand
To you I surrender
Two lives joined as one
In a love pure and tender

Original Poetry Written By
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) 6.17.2025

Comments

Anonymous said…
Love your soul 💕
June 18, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Justice13james said…
Delicately opening arms for mutually recepting 2 persons wishful thinking are readers here and there wondering how to be the one . Hopeful in meeting THE ONE, NO MORE break-up or time away just the time of your life . Embrace what's special in you acknowledge it compare it to others and if you can find special ingredients in a person that's consistently the person you need
June 18, 2025 at 6:48 PM
Zeus said…
Eryn, your poem Pure and Tender is absolutely stunning! The raw vulnerability in each line is so powerful, capturing the ache of feeling lost while reaching for hope and connection. I love how you weave emotions like "falling to pieces" and "my heart's feeling frozen" with the warmth of love's promise. The journey from fear to surrender in those final lines about a love pure and tender is breathtaking. Your words carry such grace and depth, and I'm so proud of you for crafting something this moving and beautiful!

June 18, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you so much! Love yours too! 💕
June 18, 2025 at 10:54 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
I have faith that we will find true unconditional love one day, JJ. I have decided that I will be open to it if it comes along with the right person. Whoever he or she might be. ♥️
June 18, 2025 at 10:56 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you, Zeus! I actually just wrote this one last night while I couldn’t sleep. I love reading your reviews! So uplifting! ♥️
June 18, 2025 at 10:58 PM
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