Marry Me!

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MARRY ME!

I see you watching me. 
Looking up from bended knee.
Patiently waiting on my reply.
Hoping you will be my guy.
Gently holding both my hands.
Wondering now where we stand.
Slowly showing me the ring.
I'm blinded by two karat bling.
Of course I want to marry you!
The only one I'd say I do!
I softly answer, saying yes.
We're planning out our wedded bliss.
Knowing you are my forever.
That we'll always be together.
You and I will stand all time.
A love like ours is so sublime!

Original Poetry Written By:
Eryn Dunbar
Copyright (c) Sept. 2024


Comments

Anonymous said…
This is the way life is supposed to be when your Love is equal 🌻
September 22, 2024 at 10:03 PM
Jake said…
Heart felt and yearning !
September 22, 2024 at 10:51 PM
Anonymous said…
marriage is an undeniable inevitable
September 23, 2024 at 3:41 AM
PoeTrey said…
Absolutely love this. ❤️
September 23, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Brain said…
Awe! Sweet
September 23, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
This is what people dream of, I agree! An open and equal love filled partnership.
September 23, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
Do you think so? I am 49 and never been married. I think I would honestly survive if it never did happen for me. Just my thoughts on it. Thank you for your comment!
September 23, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
Hi! Thank you for showing up because now I follow your blog! I would love to comment but it would not allow me to. Please reach out to me when you get a chance. Thank you for your feedback!
September 23, 2024 at 10:14 AM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you! I wanted to try to have more heartfelt happy poems available for viewers. I'm so glad that you liked it!
September 23, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Adam said…
Hopes, dreams and love. And the question of, can I keep her?
Beautifully written.
September 24, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
Thank you, Adam. Now this is what I had to imagine a proposal would be like. A lot of guessing on my part.
September 24, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Anonymous said…
Hearing what is not being said is deeper than mere words being said
❤️💜🩵
Jrod
September 24, 2024 at 11:15 PM
Eryona Writes! said…
That's beautiful, Jrod. Sounds a little poetic. Maybe you would like to write something and have it published on the blog?
September 24, 2024 at 11:54 PM
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